Do you see her?

She comes out and jumps in glee
A little girl full of life and smiles
She wants to play
but,
Do you see her?

She comes out and gives in abundance
A woman full of dreams and care
She is not afraid to love
but,
Do you see her?

She comes out and feels with all her heart
A human full of selflessness
She cares a lot
but,
Do you see her?

She comes out and Party's hard
A Life surrounded with Friends
She is a listener
but,
Do you see Her?

She comes out at her Charming best
Beautiful and Sexy inside out
Looks she doesn't realize, she has
but,
Do you see Her?

She is smart and intelligent
Hardworking and Proactive
Accomplishments she achieves with effort
but,
Do you see Her?

She feels Alone in the crowd
Single in this big wide world
No one understands or receives her thoughts
but
She wants you to see Her!!


Comments

  1. SGAugust 3, 2016 at 1:35 PM

    Beautiful. I wonder if this is a cry for help from a lonely girl.

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  2. DeeAugust 3, 2016 at 4:53 PM

    Thanks SG for your comment, and no its not, its just something i was thinking about, the women who are abused and are victims of DV, what they must be going through and their thought process

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  3. RajlakshmiAugust 6, 2016 at 3:26 AM

    This girl can be anyone... someone who is ignored all their lives... someone who is biased and people can't look beyond her appearance... Well written.

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    1. DeeAugust 7, 2016 at 3:25 PM

      Thanks Rajlakshmi for your comment, i totally agree it could be any one of our friends anyone who could be pretending to be happy on the out.

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  4. ShilpaAugust 7, 2016 at 8:09 AM

    Just loved this poem . Reading this feels like seeing me . Best wishes to you
    http://shilpachandrasekheran.blogspot.in/?m=1

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    1. DeeAugust 7, 2016 at 3:49 PM

      Thanks Shilpa for your comment. Hope someone sees you soon.

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    2. DeeAugust 7, 2016 at 3:50 PM

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  5. UnknownAugust 16, 2016 at 4:35 PM

    This is so inspiring! I love the post:)

    irenethayer.com

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    1. DeeAugust 17, 2016 at 4:17 PM

      Thanks Irene for visiting my blog. Glad to know its inspiring you.

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  6. BikramAugust 26, 2016 at 2:47 AM

    hmm BUt why worry if someone sees her or not.. let her BE strong and Do what she Wants to .. and let her be happy . because when one is happy everyone seems to notice :)


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    1. DeeAugust 26, 2016 at 4:17 PM

      Thanks for your comment Bikram. You are right, but as human beings in general we thrive on attention, recognition , positive reinforcements not all the time but at least sometimes. Taken for Granted seems to very common in a woman's world and in that somewhere the real woman is lost and people fail to see her..... oops looks like i got carried away LOL

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  7. BikramAugust 26, 2016 at 2:47 AM

    hmm BUt why worry if someone sees her or not.. let her BE strong and Do what she Wants to .. and let her be happy . because when one is happy everyone seems to notice :)


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